On May 24th, 1987, the Golden Gate Bridge was swarmed with people from all over the Bay Area for its 50th birthday celebration. From before dawn, thousands streamed in on every mode of transportation imaginable - trains, buses, taxis, boats, bikes, roller skates, strollers, wheelchairs, and many on foot. With the bridge closed off to vehicles for the day, a sea of pedestrians marched onto the 1.7 mile long span from both ends.
Officials had predicted around 50,000 visitors would cross the bridge and attend ceremonies in the middle. But their estimates wildly missed the mark. By 5:30AM, hundreds of thousands were already pouring onto the roadway and sidewalks at both ends. Total crowd estimates ranged from 250,000 to a whopping 800,000 celebrants on the bridge at one time. Either way, the sheer volume of people flattened out the iconic arched roadbed. Meanwhile, winds gusting 30-35mph made the densely packed bridge sway, unsettling the massive crowds.
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“I’m grateful because if the others had gotten out there, maybe the bridge would have fallen down,” Gary Giacomini, then president of the bridge district's board, told The Associated Press at the time.
While the huge crowd was the enduring memory of the 50th birthday, other activities were under way — a parade of vintage cars from the 1937 festivities, fireworks over the bridge that evening, and Tony Bennett and Carol Channing entertained at an outdoor concert on Crissy Field in the Presidio.
